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kiandranishan, 04 Apr 2008 02:57 am

- And chapter one ends. There will be an update everyday next week. Fan art, original art and sketches. Chapter 2 cover will be up Thursday and page one of chapter 2 Friday.

I'm so excited! There be new characters coming in chapter 2!

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how exciting! And ahhh, she blushed.

posted by desertkitt on 04 Apr 2008 11:50 am





 

This page, for some reason, made me sad. The lines, "Our relationship would always be like this" and also, "his mood swings would continue to cause issues." It sounded so bittersweet, as though she's simply SETTLING, as though she's not REALLY happy with things, but that's just the way they have to be. It brings to mind even strongly the fact that she really didn't CHOOSE him, per se, she was simply created to BE with him.

Beautiful page. I love her blush. (she's so innocent compared to Adam) And I can't wait till the next chapter.

posted by AnthyRose on 04 Apr 2008 09:48 pm





 

Awwww. :D "Bittersweet", that's a great word for this page, It feels like a great way to wrap it up, and it promises good things to come, but at the same time it hints at difficulty. Normally I just go 'oh okay let's see what it is' but in this case I feel kind of like... NO MAKE IT GOOD, MAKE IT GOOD. ;____;

I suppose that means you have successfully created personable and lovable characters. :D

posted by Rizu on 05 Apr 2008 12:29 am



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