Aw, so pretty...

posted by Nicarius on 20 Nov 2007 01:23 pm

your art is amazing, I def. cant wait for more

posted by Misoka_Bane on 20 Nov 2007 09:07 pm

Lovely artwork! I'll have to fav this. It really seems interesting. And I think I will have to read your other stories as well. :)

posted by rubeuswagner on 27 Nov 2007 10:27 pm

Oh man, I really love how the hair wraps around the panel, that's seriously awesome. The hair in general, it has such a soft feeling to it. God(?)'s head does look a little large in comparison to body, but it's not really that noticeable.
and your backgrounds holy crap. I'm jealous. So lush and green!
Just noticed the detail in the finger, too. Again, kudos, I love it. *_* Definitely going to keep my eye on this one.

posted by Rizu on 28 Nov 2007 12:59 am

Fucking stupid whore. Why does everyone have to make their own versions of this story. No one wants to hear your naive lesbian romance. Go suck a dick.

posted by wolfe (Guest) on 28 Nov 2007 11:30 am

oh, look, one of those angry fat kids that sits in their mother's basement all day :D i love finding those


I felt the need to say, in context of that last comment, that at least 30 people so far with Smackjeeves accounts wanted to hear it. Ignore the internet turds, they're fat anyway.

posted by Rizu on 28 Nov 2007 12:41 pm

Well, I think someone is just too stupid to put it in words. Kiandranishan have all the right to make her own version of Adam's and Eve's story. I think the profile made pretty clear that this was HER interpretation. If you didn't liked the idea, why did you even bother to read it? You said that nobody wants to read this story? Well, me and all her other 29 fans don't agree with you. AND your last statement is just too much disgusting to even comment.

God, why did we have to live on the same planet that this freak?

posted by Anfitere on 28 Nov 2007 09:51 pm

it took me a few minutes to stop laughing my ass off after that lovely and colorful comment by wolfe. Thanks for coming to my defense guys.

And to correct you Wolfe, there is nothing lesbian about this story(not that I have a problem with lesbianism...being a bisexual myself). The page with the "kiss" was just God passing Eve's soul to her. It's no more romantic than a lifeguard giving mouth to mouth resuscitation!

And there is nothing naive about this either. I've been researching the Christian creation myth for a little over a decade to gear up for this story. I delved into the direct translations of Genesis and the Hebrew mythologies. If you have ever researched the story you would know that there are "parts" to God and that some of them are female.

Thanks to all my fans and I will have a new page up today!

posted by kiandranishan on 02 Dec 2007 04:27 am

Life guards get me hot. Oooh, baby! give me that breath of life!

posted by FeddieChick (Guest) on 02 Dec 2007 10:58 am

I knew God was a woman, and men be her pawns, yay ;-D

I know you say it's not lesbian/sexual, this... but hey, let me have the pleasure just to believe so =^___^=

posted by carolafunder on 12 Jun 2008 03:32 pm

yeah i have to say im really glad you made god a woman coming from an abrahamic judeo-chistian) backround myself i was never to pleased with the male version of god although some pieces of the torah (or old testament which ever you prefer) do seem to make god out to be an angry drunk guy...think sodam and gommorah(sp?) for instance...
Bautiful artwork and a well told story well deserving of the spotlight which brought me here.

posted by LongLiveRa on 23 Jul 2008 12:24 am